Finding Clarity

August 16, 2007 - 10:36am

My friend Cynthia and I have conversations about clarity in writing. She is mostly a poet, so clarity is not her main goal, though she needs a measure of it. I am an essayist and story-teller, so clarity is a serious goal for my writing. If you want something really good, combine simplicity with your clarity. Now you're starting to discover quality.

I came across this video, which I love for its simple clarity. It makes things clear.

The main point of this video - when it comes to global warming, we need to be making column choices and not spending all of our time arguing about rows. Check it out and pass it on to others if you like it.

HINT: If you are watching a video online and it keeps stopping, pause it for a short time, and let the download get ahead of you.

rlp

 

Submitted by drybones on August 16, 2007 - 11:36am.

Well, I agree with the conclusion (that we should do something about global warming), but the argument seems to mimic Pascal's Wager. I'm not sure it works.

It invites us to consider the consequences of acting (or not) without considering how likely the outcomes are. Here's an example: I may or may not get shot tomorrow. I can't say for sure one way or another. I do have a choice about whether I'll wear a bullet proof vest. The reasonable course for me is to choose to wear the vest – the consequences of not doing so are dire, whereas the consequences of wearing one are, at worst, getting ridiculed and being uncomfortably warm.

But I won't wear a bullet proof vest tomorrow. I'm not willing to accept even mild consequences, because I think the risk of getting shot is vanishingly small. We balance risks and consequences all the time, otherwise we'd spend all our time and energy defending against very unlikely threats. (For extra credit, try applying this to our response to terrorism.)

Of course, I'm now going to feel especially silly if I do get shot tomorrow...

Submitted by Stacy McKenna Seip on August 16, 2007 - 11:43am.

Well, simplifying problems down into a model like this can make them clearer, but it always requires a certain level of assumptions and generalizations. The assumptions inherent here that I don't quite buy are:
1) we can pour enough money into column A to make a significant global difference
2) that global depression will not also result in social/political/health catastrophes. He puts Col B negatives in a much stronger light than the Col A negatives, when the only difference I see there is really whether people achieved misfortune through weather/climate or depression/war (because desperation often drives people to war in hopes of bettering position or obtaining control of resources - not particularly far-thinking, but true)

Submitted by rlp on August 16, 2007 - 12:26pm.

I agree that #1 may be true. But wouldn't you like to give it a good shot anyway? Given that the scientific community seems to be in agreement now that our actions do affect this.

As to your #2: Hmm, well perhaps global economic trouble is worse than he said, but it still pales in comparison to his worst case scenario. Simply removing coastal property and driving refugees inland all over the world is a complicating factor that runs chills up and down my spine.

Look, I've never been a conspiracy theory guy. And ever since Y2K, I've vowed not to be taken in by alarmists. But I think global warming is a different issue. If all we do is significantly lower our dependence on fossil fuels over the next 50 years, then all of this will have been worth it, regardless.

Submitted by Stacy McKenna Seip on August 16, 2007 - 7:20pm.

RLP, as an Environmental Engineer by trade, I've been pushing for these kinds of personal behaviors since before Al Gore was cool. ;P But, at the same time, the data I've seen within the scientific community doesn't convince me the scientific community's as "in agreement" about global warming as the media and politics paints it. It's attention getting, sure. And that gets scientists funding. But the science linking human activity and global warming is sketchy at best for me.

As for coastal living issues, I've always been one who endorses living on high ground anyway (and I don't mean the kind that slides down the cliffs onto PCH every winter here in Malibu). I know it's less of an option for some populations than it is for the one I live in, but if people's priorities were safety rather than convenience/beauty, i think there'd be a lot fewer people on water-endangered properties in the first place. It's a matter of priorities, just like personal choices about using petro fuels, etc.

As with anything, we all have to do what we think is best to protect ourselves and those we care about (even globally) and if that means sacrificing our retirement plans to pay for low CO2 options, so be it! But everyone's going to define "protecting" differently, so getting a groundswell movement on something as costly as this is going to be tough.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 12:31pm.

Its all going to burn... so who cares anyway.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 1:20pm.

and jesus will come back soon, too. don't forget that.

"thief in the night" y'all. forget global climate change. get to rapture practicing.

Submitted by mattman on August 16, 2007 - 1:19pm.

I do, since the burning is millions of years off.

Submitted by scout on August 16, 2007 - 1:35pm.

This is simple game theory. You can apply it to any societal/governmental/political issue and come out with an appropriate course of action (assuming, of course, that you've made the right assumptions). I learned the various game theory techniques to problem solving as a college sophomore in a year long course instructed jointly by Robert Axelrod and Charles Ostrom. Its reliability is amazing. In fact, I often find myself using the theories to make the most mundane of choices.

Submitted by iandunn on August 16, 2007 - 1:45pm.

I think one of the flaws with that is his assumption that the only responsible choice is to act given that we don't know if we're causing it and that the risk of not doing something outweighs the risk of doing something. Wouldn't finding out if we're causing it be more responsible than just picking the safest option? Although I guess most environmentalists would argue that there already is a consensus and his goal in this was to avoid that argument altogether. But that's the problem with trying to make things simpler than they really are.

Having said that, I think at the very least we should make the changes that are both environmentally and financially responsible, like CFL lightbulbs, hybrid cars, energy efficient appliances, etc.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 1:53pm.

If we followed this "logic" in the 70's we'd have safely prepared ourselves against the then "dire threat" of Global Cooling.

I think the real solution is to wrest control of this issue away from politicians, and talking heads and instill a sense of conservation and stewardship in our kids, ourselves, our families and our communities. Allowing "Global Warming" to BECOME an issue is what's wrong because we'll always be subject to potential manipulation.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 6:49pm.

This argument is nothing more than a weak distraction. We know incredibly, massively, more than we did in 1975. We have satellites and gps, we have more accurate weather and atmosphere measurements, we measure ocean temperatures and changes in weather and climate in places far removed from man. We have people on rafts in the pacific, or in holes in the antarctic, we have people studying from the viewpoints of space and underwater.

And you seem to be implying our conclusions are just as frail as they were in 1975, where a few scientists were espousing their viewpoints through the spectacle of the media. You bring up these popular-science references, as if they compared at all to today's work of thousands of scientists in countries all across the planet.

Your implication is wrong.

There is a magnitude in difference between our understanding now, and our understanding then.

....Jeffrey Boser

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 1:56pm.

This is all hog-wash.
Ice age, melting of the ice age. No humans to blame on that.
Hottest day in history was in the 1930's, who really knows. I don't think they had digital thermomitors in the 1700's.
What about the global cooling in the 1970's.
What are ya gonna do, but a carbon offset. Doesn't offset shit.
Hog-wash.

Lyle

Submitted by OldPoet on August 16, 2007 - 2:02pm.

I have been, long before the fall of communism and the Berlin wall, in East Germany. It was a pretty depressing place. At the fall of the wall, as reunification was happening, I lived in Germany. There were lengthy reports about the pollution that had occured in the East. There were not enough govt controls on waste and discharge and air pollution. I remember the pictures, and I remember what I saw with my own eyes. I compare that to the oh-so-tidy West Germany where I lived. The comparison was knife-edge sharp.

What's my point? Many billions of Deutschmarks and then Euros have gone into cleaning up the water and in retrofitting industry. Much has been achieved. It's not perfect. There are less polluting cars (the Trabant was a smoking nightmare) and more polluting trucks with increased business.

More clarity needed...The situation got horrible in the former GDR after WWII. It got better after reunification with the west.

Bringing it home...It cost the West Germans a Bundle. They still have ramifications from pollution today. But, it was fixable. Can we say the same thing for the ramifications of possible Global Climate Change in our future?

We don't have a Western Earth to look to for help?

OldPoet

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 8:59pm.

Pittsburgh PA has a similar tale. For years they had such bad air pollution that the percentages of lung cancer and lung related disorders were staggering. They did a massive clean up and became (don't know if it's still true today or not, but maybe....) one of the best models of clean air cities in the country. It didn't take long. It just took effort. And the city was not bankrupted.

Now I don't know about the veracity of this argument. I tend to agree with the Pascal's Wager observer. And there I've heard some scientists talk about how every planet in our solar system is experiencing a global warming. Which points to something up with the sun.

However, given all that, I can't see how it would hurt us to keep our room a bit cleaner and tidier. Cut back on all the stuff we MUST HAVE. And, for me....my observation...is that we have to move to change advertising and marketing. Among other steps, sure. But that one is huge. I recommend a book called "Born to Buy" by Juliet Schor. It may sound way off the mark on this post. But I swear it's not. If you think about it. It's stuff, and the making of stuff that's dirtying the place up. IMHO.

Anyway, OldPoet, clarity needed. Yes it is. And it doesn't have to cost a fortune.

Presbyterian Gal

Submitted by Clare Lane on August 16, 2007 - 2:06pm.

I'm not a fan of any argument that says tomorrow is going to be worse than today whether it is preached from a pulpit or a podium.

On that note, I disagree with being lazy in our stewardship of the earth. The rapture is going to happen so let's drive SUVs anyways?!?! There's a popular saying amongst muslims- Allah alim- which means "God willing". My friend who was a soldier in Iraq found this phrase extremely troublesome because it removed all personal responsbility. To me, that's all I hear when someone says we can only pray, we shouldn't care because our treasures are in heaven, or the world is outside our control. We are here and we are doing this.

So let's do something about it.

"God? I hope so"

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 6:59pm.

I discussed this with an EndOfTimes friend of mine. She said she wanted, she hoped, that the end would come soon, and wipe all the sin away. That she saw the world as flawed and hopeless, and was just living in expectation of Jesus.

I pointed out to her that what we want are often against God's wishes. Our desires are based on earthly bodies and minds. I asked her how she knew, how she could possibly know that, even if God says that it will happen, that he wants it to happen sooner rather than later? Just because she wanted God to want what she wanted? Hadn't she ever prayed for guidance and found that the answer was something she didn't like?

She hasn't talked to me much since, sadly.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 7:41pm.

Sad and silly that so many folks waste time and energy worrying about humans bringing about catastrophic environmental change or, even sillier thinking we can stop it if it is coming. Living in fear of the unknown future, without a clear understanding of the known past. The flippant reference to global depression, reeks of oblivious affluence. While we waste money and energy fighting this paper tiger, our infrastructure continues to crumble, bridges collapse, roadways become more and more unsafe. Even more sadly, a world of oppressed and hurting people in present need. If you want to decide what to take action on try this:
Yes No
Hurting People /

True Expensive / Spend energy on Global Warming
Helps Need Now / People Continue in Need
Human Interaction / Children Starve
Positive Self Image/ Violent Unrest
Undisputed Favor of/ AIDS, Malaria, TB
CReator

False Money in Economy / Self Absorption
Human Interaction / Isolationism
Favor of creator / HD LCD TV's
Postitive Image / Disconnect from Humanity

So the choice is really - waste, time and resources on something that may or may not ever happen and you may or may not have an impact on changing, OR put aside the fear and focus resources and energy on changing the world one life at a time.

All you have to do is spread the word -- (crap that's not right) You actually have to do something for a real living breathing person right there in front of you. Maybe that's why folks are so worked up about climate change - it is not as messy or difficult to deal with. Buy a hybrid, burn ethanol, go solar, but keep your second coat, leave the samaritan by the road, etc.

Just an aside, about our silly world. In my community, the Capital Area Animal Welfare Society recently took top place in Burger Kings drive for the cause deal. CAAWS got more support than the Burn Unit at the local hospital. The local homeless shelter, hospice care center, etc. didn't even make the also ran list.

It just seems so damn silly.

H.Kay Rothkamm

Submitted by Lit Geek on August 16, 2007 - 8:30pm.

Combating climate change is not about choosing the climate over the people in our community. No workers or volunteers at hospices, burn wards, or homeless shelters are being asked to stop working at hospices, burn wards, or homeless shelters. The goal is to lead those lives in a more responsible manner, because the evidence is mounting that it DOES make a difference.

Maybe people are buying hybrid cars and neglecting to care for their neighbors. In fact, there are definitely people who do both those things. But I am not convinced that if those people "put aside the fear" (an act that at this point constitutes simple denial), they would choose instead to drive normal cars and spend their weekends delivering meals on wheels. People who have the courage to care about other people will continue to do so, and those who don't will continue the same way until something changes their minds. None of that means that they can't be leading environmentally responsible lives all the while.

Yes, this video discusses changing public policy; yes, I believe that public policy ought to actively combat climate change. But at heart, dealing with climate change depends on individuals making certain responsible choices about the way they go about their routines, however altruistic or self-serving those routines are in every other respect. It's not about stealing the well-intentioned people away.

Submitted by Anonymous User on September 2, 2007 - 5:24am.

All of that humanitarian work that you want done, especially in the poorest, most developing countries? None of that will matter if even some of the lesser scenarios of global warming occur. None. Because everything development agencies have been helping people with - water crises, droughts, agriculture, health care - will be worse. Farmers no longer know how to plan their crops, which means that subsistence farmers won't have food. Water shortages further threaten agriculture. And unlike people in the US, these people won't have money to fall back on, they won't have somewhere to go. Think about the people in New Orleans after Katrina. Apply that to the entire country of Bangladesh, and you see the extent of the problem.

Or as Christian Aid's website says: "Climate change’s greatest injustice is that poor countries are paying the highest price for a problem they did not create. Global warming is a global challenge, and it is in all our interests to act. But unless we act right now we can say goodbye to the vision of a world free from poverty." I worked for Christian Aid (UK relief/development/campaigning agency) this spring, and I organized two events focusing on climate change issues, both because of their campaign and because I believe this is an issue of global justice. Oxfam has taken up climate change as a cause for a similar issue, as has Mercy Corps. Even locally, the poorest people will be the most effected in the US. People without heat or air conditioning will be the ones to suffer the most from colder winters and hotter summers.

The entire problem is that climate change is not easy, is not simple. In fact, it makes everything much more complicated. Which is why when we consider solutions to climate change, they have to emphasize that global justice angle. Otherwise we have solutions - like biofuels, using food that would otherwise go to global aid - that only makes things worse. It's only with a global and local perspective that we can actually do something that actually benefits everyone. Neither hands-on or public policy change works by themselves - you need both.

Submitted by Anonymous User on September 2, 2007 - 5:25am.

Sorry, forgot to put my name.

- Shannon

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 8:40pm.

The video is an environmental version of Pascal's Wager, which involves belief in God. To me the underlying question is "in this life are we to take well intended, thoughtful action?" And to me, our worth is in our relationship, actions and reactions to others (and God).

To care but not act, in a moral sense and an environmental sense, is the functional equivalent of not caring when viewed from the perspective of the outside world.

We then have to quibble about whether things like prayer and writing are "action".

Not being Taoist, I have to try to opt for action, in whatever small forms it may take.

Interesting stuff! (to me at least)
Dan

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 9:22pm.

Just a comment on the video itself...

Man, final comments are a PAIN. A conclusion to an essay, closing remarks to a formal letter, final comments in an on-air story on the news -- the temptation to be cheesy is overwhelming. I, personally, admit that I have ended many solid pieces of writing with spectacularly underwhelming concluding remarks. I knew that I was doing it but couldn't stop, just because I needed to wrap things up but couldn't think of any other way to do it. Enter the cheese.

Forest Gump was lucky; he just ended his soliloquies with, "And that's all I have to say about that." Brilliant.

I liked the guy's boxes; I thought his delivery was confident but not pretentious; I thought his logic was very thought-provoking at the very least. But that conclusion... "even though I've never met you, my fate is tied to yours"? SPARE me the emotional manipulation. What a shame after such a solid piece of work.

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 16, 2007 - 10:57pm.

For follow up videos by the same guy, addressing some of the comments raised here also, see

http://www.youtube.com/profile_videos?user=wonderingmind42

Ralf

Submitted by Anonymous User on August 17, 2007 - 6:42pm.

Hi you really had me (us?) going there, rlp..loved it..believed it (for about a nano second) Google Lark News or Virtual Pastor...we were not the only ones both amused and appalled...Gail (aka PrGirl)