Moon Colors

July 8, 2006 - 12:08pm
 

the night was bending and turning and lonely
we were tossed in our sheets by our dreams
i heard a train in the distance
   pleading like a ship seeking safe passage

something is wrong and lonely between us
but the lonely wrongness is going away
   because you turned and bent and reached
      and so did i

we were sleepy and there were only shades of grey
      and our fan, ever faithful
         keeping watch over us by night

we sought each other tearfully, finally
   you were my pillow and I was your boy
   i was your comfort and you were my only one

maybe the night was an opening thing
   opening us because we were barely awake
      and our guards were down
      and nothing casts out fear like sleepy love

it is like a rampart of pressed earth
   thrown up before the ages
   and beaten by desperate hands

it is like a bulwark of moon colors and faith
   rising up in the dead of night
   to take on all comers

       

For J9, only mine

rlp

 

Submitted by Pascale Soleil on July 8, 2006 - 12:58pm.

This made me cry.
Go figure.

both2and: beyond binary

Submitted by OldPoet on July 8, 2006 - 1:45pm.

OldPoet
Great poetry and a great muse. Lucky you.
C

Submitted by Broken Messenger on July 8, 2006 - 3:43pm.

Gordon,

This is very beautiful imagery you have evoked. If the words you wrote here were paint and canvas, this would be a vivid masterpiece. To God be the glory through your work, Gordon.

Brad
www.brokenmessenger.com

Submitted by atticus on July 8, 2006 - 7:28pm.

i know of this thing called sleepy love, when our guards are down..i believe without it, long-married couples might destroy each other; maybe that's too strong, but i know for me and my husband, i need these moments of familiarity,in the dark, metaphorically and physically, to get through the times of unfamiliarity. thank you for being so open...to so many

Submitted by donandval on July 9, 2006 - 12:31am.

What moving words. I feel like I've intruded on something quiet and sacred. You are a very strong man for sharing that with us, Gordon. Thank you.

Submitted by Anonymous User on July 9, 2006 - 4:58am.

I'd just like to say thanks for reclaiming the word "bulwark". :)

Submitted by Anonymous User on July 10, 2006 - 11:37am.

Yup. Good Lutheran word. (Although we certainly don't have a monopoly on it!) :-)

Submitted by harper on July 9, 2006 - 10:16am.

One love poem calls forth another, Rumi wrote this:

At night we fall into each other with such grace.
When it's light, you throw me back
like you do your hair.
Your eyes now drink with God,
mine with looking at you,
one drunkard takes care of another.

Submitted by abiding on July 9, 2006 - 10:39am.

Beautiful...

Submitted by susiederk on July 9, 2006 - 1:30pm.

my friend ging and I were talking recently about you. Actually about your wife. It can't be easy to be the spouse of a minister. Even harder, to be spouse of THE real live preacher.
She helps make you the writer you are and we are thankful for that.

Submitted by Wandering Willow on July 9, 2006 - 7:44pm.

This is so delicate and true and intimate. I love it. I"d like to share it with my husband.

http://blogs.salon.com/0003947
www.wanderingwillowblog.blogspot.com