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Part Two
This story was originally in two parts. You can read the whole story here. I left this entry in place to preserve the comments.
Note: This story is the third in a threesome of Foy Davis stories. The first is "Extreme Unction," and the second is "De Nada."
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Oooohhhh! Need to know what happens next.......
As always great writing, you swept me along on a tide of emotions along with those folk in the crowd.
Hope Foy finds what he is looking for. Loneliness is a killer.
Lou
For some reason, I feel the infrequent urge to comment. But I have no idea what to say.
Hi Bob,
Obviously you're not alone. This story seems to speak less to others or perhaps no one is sure what it is saying. Not a lot of comments.
Foy is like that for me too. I don't know what's going on with this guy's life. I don't have to go anywhere with him. I just describe moments in his life and how he feels and reacts. I don't know if I'll never write about him again or if perhaps this is turning into a more serious work of fiction.
It's rather nice for me just to let him live and not worry to much about what his life might be saying to you or to me or to anyone else.
Commenting now would be like applauding at the wrong time at a classical concert.
Amen.
Yes, Keith's analogy seems to fit. Lauren
What they said.
It's just the little things--seemingly insignificant details--that seem to resonate from this story. That milk bottle on the floor of the bus just tortured me.
I know this pain and it's recent and it's fresh and I'm right there. I think I even have that Bible. I think that I AM that Bible. I'm saying goodbye this week to a ministry of 10 years -- and the leaving isn't pretty. I've a position at a much smaller church, less pay, but with a gentle group of people and maybe I can heal.
Anonymous, Its amazing how many people know this pain.
Yes, it is, isn't it? That feeling of lonely in the middle of a crowd or, for that matter, a family.
It is particularly amazing how many ministers deal with the kind of pain you are dealing with. I hope your departure from your current position goes as well as possible, and that in time you can somehow come to remember them fondly. Maybe your new postition will help with that.
This is fiction, but I take it as a compliment that it seemed real to you.
Gordon, I appreciate your gentle response, but my last comment was to the anonymous commenter above. I hope you haven't been worrying about my sanity for the last 3 days.
lol
loved it... as usual.